Well, (IMHO) the train might derail upon hitting the stocking on the track (or it might just push the stocking out of the way). The right three-quarters seem detail-heavy compared to the plain left quarter. Other than that, this looks to be another highly polished, whimsical, well-done illustration. You do great work. :)
I like the stocking overlapping the track but I agree about the corner feeling empty compared to the rest of the piece. You probably already finished it by now but if not then there you go.
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Well, (IMHO) the train might derail upon hitting the stocking on the track (or it might just push the stocking out of the way). The right three-quarters seem detail-heavy compared to the plain left quarter. Other than that, this looks to be another highly polished, whimsical, well-done illustration. You do great work. :)
I like the stocking overlapping the track but I agree about the corner feeling empty compared to the rest of the piece.
You probably already finished it by now but if not then there you go.
You know what. I like that corner being empty, and I'm not a firm believer in use of space. Very camera shutter, I can dig that.
Great illustration. That's a lot of gifts for one kid. You may want to bring the train around a bit more, take out the dog, and add a little girl.
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