Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Christmas Mailer



Here is my sketch for a christmas mailer...critique anyone?

4 comments:

Andrew W. Moir said...

Well, (IMHO) the train might derail upon hitting the stocking on the track (or it might just push the stocking out of the way). The right three-quarters seem detail-heavy compared to the plain left quarter. Other than that, this looks to be another highly polished, whimsical, well-done illustration. You do great work. :)

Manelle said...

I like the stocking overlapping the track but I agree about the corner feeling empty compared to the rest of the piece.
You probably already finished it by now but if not then there you go.

Spacecat Power said...

You know what. I like that corner being empty, and I'm not a firm believer in use of space. Very camera shutter, I can dig that.

Anonymous said...

Great illustration. That's a lot of gifts for one kid. You may want to bring the train around a bit more, take out the dog, and add a little girl.