Saturday, July 28, 2007

Dance Poster Revision



I was asked to revise my original and add in a male dancer so this is what came out. I am not sold on it but I tried a ton of different variations and this was the best one I could come with. Tell me what you think. Which on do you prefer, old or new?

8 comments:

afton said...

oh i looooooove the new one!! both are cool, but this one seems brighter.

Dani said...

I like your revision. You did well. I kind of wish the guy was looking at the girl, though. Good job.

Joe LeDosquet said...

I guess I'm the rain cloud here, but I agree with you that it was stronger pre-dude addage.
It's still good, but it seems to have disrupted some of the movement and he doesn't seem as light and airy as her.
(I guess I'm still your biggest critic, but you know you love it.)

john smith said...

I think the dude should be in her hair playing that guitar.

Jessica Crysallis said...

I don't know - I really like it without the guy - That is what I tried last year but they made me put a guy in! Guys just always ruin everything! He he he! Anyhow - great job though!

sheyna axtell said...

What do you mean there isn't a guy in this? There are two, dancing in her hair! I do agree, the image was much stronger without the guy, but if you didn't know the difference, you'd think it was fabulous anyway.

David Theriault said...

maybe just fade him further back with some atmospheriness....
Mmmmmm.... atmospheriness.
:)

Anonymous said...

I think adding the guy really helped your design. His angle brings you back into the image. The girl looked lonely all by herself. This is a really awesome poster. I'm so proud of you. *tear*
-Laura Wegkamp